Originally I was going to have the people actually waiting to see Milt, and send Marina down to the cafeteria with Russ to get coffee while they wait for the line to clear. But I decided that would be too hard on poor Milt right after he'd been shot! So I went with this instead.
There are still things I'd like to do here, though. Bump up the description a little, especially later on. Give Russ a little more to do. IDK. Speed writing is hard.
I have this whole story idea about why Milt and his mother don't speak inspired by Milt's line in "Cereal Killer" about knowing how thankless it is to try and save someone who doesn't want to be saved, which is where the Mikey thing comes in. One day I'll write that story properly. (She says optimistically.)
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Originally I was going to have the people actually waiting to see Milt, and send Marina down to the cafeteria with Russ to get coffee while they wait for the line to clear. But I decided that would be too hard on poor Milt right after he'd been shot! So I went with this instead.
There are still things I'd like to do here, though. Bump up the description a little, especially later on. Give Russ a little more to do. IDK. Speed writing is hard.
I have this whole story idea about why Milt and his mother don't speak inspired by Milt's line in "Cereal Killer" about knowing how thankless it is to try and save someone who doesn't want to be saved, which is where the Mikey thing comes in. One day I'll write that story properly. (She says optimistically.)